Am I trolling the bots with this post title? Me?
I knew I'd gone through her script too fast. I'd even made notes such as: #fill this out later!
I guess I was having too much fun with her. Now, after a meeting with Will and a few additions... about another 3500 words, I think Aoi's finished.
The middle's a little more fun, if that's possible. I bring back some more old faces: Noda, from 2nd Shift, and Naughty Nurse Naruko, from Any Shaft. The ending got a bit darker; to clarify things, I had to find out what happened to Aoi's mom. And a throw-away line from Aya is a great segue for me to start writing Aris' script.
Off today and tomorrow. Spent the morning editing and coding one of Will's spin-off VN's. I'd love to talk about it, but it's mostly his work, so I'll leave it there.
So, now I step away from Aoi, right into Phlegethon.